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In Haiku
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Shades of Deep Purple |
The Book Of Taliesyn |
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Deep Purple |
In Rock |
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Fireball |
Machine Head |
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Who Do We Think We Are? |
Burn |
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Stormbringer |
Come Taste The Band |
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Perfect Strangers |
House Of Blue Light |
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Slaves And Masters |
The Battle Rages On |
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Purpendicular |
Abandon |
Haiku poems consist of three units of 5, 7 and 5 syllables, respectively. There is some debate over exactly what is a syllable in English, but, each of the poems above has three lines of 5-7-5 syllables as spoken by me! No doubt I've broken the rules by running some of my "units" over more than one line.
A haiku poem should be an observation, a snapshot, a distillation of a moment in nature. It is not a story, and it should not have a conclusion. Its characteristics should include simplicity of language, directness of communication, rhythm but not rhyme, and the absence of a narrator. A title is unnecessary.
Given that I was writing album reviews, it was impossible to adhere to these 'rules', although I have tried as much as possible to do so.
One rule which I did break was that one shouldn't use metaphor. The idea that Purpendicular is like an irregular multi-faceted sparkling gem whereas Abandon is a sinister dark and dense lump, came to me a few years ago, and I find it difficult to think of them in any other way now. In any case, irregular gems and lumps of dark minerals occur naturally, so I'd argue that these haikus are indeed 'moments in nature'.
Each haiku must contain a kigo, a season word, which indicates the season in which the haiku is set. There are thousands of words which can be used - books of season words are published. For example, cherry blossoms indicate spring, snow indicates winter, and mosquitoes indicate summer.
However, the season word need not always be obvious. In each poem I have tried to use a season word or phrase (such as "debut", "growing", "decline", and "second coming") which is appropriate to the stage of the band's development and lifetime.
The one exception is for Machine Head, in which the season word "cold" simply refers to the fact that it was cold in Switzerland in December! Maybe "immortal" is actually the season word there... That poem is also the only one which directly quotes any of DP's songs - if there's one song for which an exception can be made, it's that one.
Hope you enjoyed them.
Proudly edited by Rasmus Heide
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